I think he is a hero. Because he tries to do right things. His clothes are strange. But it's freedom of choice. I don't care... By the way, I will send you important message. Please read it on facebook. Thank you
Mr ford. i think Jones who wears a black mask with yellow stripes and a bulging muscle bodysuit, said he was only trying to stop a street fight He want to do something to show the world. that he is a hero and he try to stop fighting so i think he try his best. and he did a great job................
@ Melani: you should say, he must work 'with' the police or firemen. You only use 'at' to describe a location. 'With' is used as: in conjunction. Also, It should read, 'I think he is searching for fame.'
@ Hayatooooo, Because he tries to do the right thing. not thingS. I also agree with you. He is a hero. But why do you feel that he is a hero? That is the real question I am asking. What qualities does a hero possess? DO you think Phoenix Jones possesses the qualities?
@ Sam, I have copied and corrected your entire quote from above. Look at the corrected version and see how it differs from the one you posted earlier. Note that all sentences begin with a capital letter. I do like how you used the adjective, bulging muscle body suit. It really gives a good description of Phoenix Jones' appearance.
Corrected version: Mr Ford. I think Jones, who wears a black mask with yellow stripes and a bulging muscle bodysuit, said he was only trying to stop a street fight. He wants to do something to show the world that he is a hero and he tried to stop fighting. So i think he tried his best. and he did a great job...............
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@Hayatoooo, Now that I think about it. You can say he tries to do right things, however, most American people will tie this situation to a familiar phrase: do the right thing! There fore, it is more common for an American to say, "he tries to do the right thing." versus "he tries to do right things." As I stand corrected before, both are technically accepted.
I think, he will be a hero, he must work at the police or fireman or whatever work for helps the people. I think he is search for a fame.
ReplyDeleteI think he is a hero. Because he tries to do right things. His clothes are strange. But it's freedom of choice. I don't care... By the way, I will send you important message. Please read it on facebook.
ReplyDeleteThank you
Mr ford. i think Jones who wears a black mask with yellow stripes and a bulging muscle bodysuit, said he was only trying to stop a street fight He want to do something to show the world. that he is a hero and he try to stop fighting so i think he try his best. and he did a great job................
ReplyDelete@ Melani: you should say, he must work 'with' the police or firemen. You only use 'at' to describe a location. 'With' is used as: in conjunction. Also, It should read, 'I think he is searching for fame.'
ReplyDelete@ Hayatooooo,
ReplyDeleteBecause he tries to do the right thing. not thingS. I also agree with you. He is a hero. But why do you feel that he is a hero? That is the real question I am asking. What qualities does a hero possess? DO you think Phoenix Jones possesses the qualities?
@ Sam, I have copied and corrected your entire quote from above. Look at the corrected version and see how it differs from the one you posted earlier. Note that all sentences begin with a capital letter. I do like how you used the adjective, bulging muscle body suit. It really gives a good description of Phoenix Jones' appearance.
ReplyDeleteCorrected version:
Mr Ford. I think Jones, who wears a black mask with yellow stripes and a bulging muscle bodysuit, said he was only trying to stop a street fight. He wants to do something to show the world that he is a hero and he tried to stop fighting. So i think he tried his best. and he did a great job...............
Great job so far guys! This online dialogue benefits all of us by seeing our writing online and sharing it with others. Make sure to read your posts and edit them before you post them. You should edit your work regardless; whether it is written on paper, or typed on a computer.#mr.ford
ReplyDelete@Hayatoooo,
ReplyDeleteNow that I think about it. You can say he tries to do right things, however, most American people will tie this situation to a familiar phrase: do the right thing! There fore, it is more common for an American to say, "he tries to do the right thing." versus "he tries to do right things." As I stand corrected before, both are technically accepted.